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    Hi,

    I am currently trying to update my totally homemade landing pages for all my domains.

    Example: http://yenit.com/seniorsupport

    1. Is the text enough, or should I add more statistics, renewals, etc?

    2. I have worked a lot with graphic design, but I get the impression that this look rather "old school" and maybe not that inviting. What is your impression?

    3. I have tried to make it responsive to also work smoothly in smartphones and tablets. Any thoughts?

    Many thanks in advance for any constructive feedback!

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    Ps. The top Hong Kong panorama photo will probably be replaced later on. I will probably alternate ten different photos there...
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    • #3
      Hi Fancy,

      I like it, so I have only 2 remarks, which maybe would be helpful. Personally (but it all comes to personal taste, so take it as such and with pinch of salt) I would like to see more colors there..you know, I am all about logos and colors, as I know many end users like them..it is maybe my deformation from real estate, when one can sell expensive property just because "i like the pink sofa there" kind of remarks, buyers are often totally ignoring numbers/roi/profit behind the purchase..lets remember that although we are quite logical people here, people (buyers) can be extremely irrational..and some irrational individuals have tons of money So I say colors and nice logos, if you do not have time for logos, then at least some colors.

      One more thing : personally, I would avoid using word "premium" domain name in the description : it is clear for me that you mean "premium" as quality indicator, unfortunately this word starts to get negative connotations in new gTLD space, as "premium" can also mean "high renewal". When I browse different marketplaces, whenever I see "premium", I skip it as I am afraid of huge price tag, or of huge renewal. Again, maybe it is just me, but I would replace "premium" with "beautiful", "unique", "amazing"..this kind of adjectives

      Apart small remarks above, good work imo.
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      • #4
        Originally posted by Marek View Post
        Hi Fancy,

        I like it, so I have only 2 remarks, which maybe would be helpful. Personally (but it all comes to personal taste, so take it as such and with pinch of salt) I would like to see more colors there..you know, I am all about logos and colors, as I know many end users like them..it is maybe my deformation from real estate, when one can sell expensive property just because "i like the pink sofa there" kind of remarks, buyers are often totally ignoring numbers/roi/profit behind the purchase..lets remember that although we are quite logical people here, people (buyers) can be extremely irrational..and some irrational individuals have tons of money So I say colors and nice logos, if you do not have time for logos, then at least some colors.

        One more thing : personally, I would avoid using word "premium" domain name in the description : it is clear for me that you mean "premium" as quality indicator, unfortunately this word starts to get negative connotations in new gTLD space, as "premium" can also mean "high renewal". When I browse different marketplaces, whenever I see "premium", I skip it as I am afraid of huge price tag, or of huge renewal. Again, maybe it is just me, but I would replace "premium" with "beautiful", "unique", "amazing"..this kind of adjectives

        Apart small remarks above, good work imo.

        Very very good and constructive feedback!

        It is in the middle of the night here, but within a few days, I will work on the colors. The word premium will be removed within ten minutes! I should have thought of this myself, but you know how it is with your own stuff. Easy to get "blind".

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        • Marek
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          Very gladly mate

      • #5
        Originally posted by Fancy Domains View Post
        Hi,

        I am currently trying to update my totally homemade landing pages for all my domains.

        Example: http://yenit.com/seniorsupport

        1. Is the text enough, or should I add more statistics, renewals, etc?

        2. I have worked a lot with graphic design, but I get the impression that this look rather "old school" and maybe not that inviting. What is your impression?

        3. I have tried to make it responsive to also work smoothly in smartphones and tablets. Any thoughts?

        Many thanks in advance for any constructive feedback!
        First, a general question: Is there any advantage of using your own lander over using the Uniregistry Market or Bodis?

        Regarding the lander itself, I would add a "BUY IT NOW" button that redirects to an Escrow.com transaction, like the one furniture.world has.

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        • #6
          I just added a lot of yellow color to the site, so right now it looks kind of CRAZY.

          I will continue tomorrow or so.

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          • #7
            Originally posted by Dan View Post

            First, a general question: Is there any advantage of using your own lander over using the Uniregistry Market or Bodis?

            Regarding the lander itself, I would add a "BUY IT NOW" button that redirects to an Escrow.com transaction, like the one furniture.world has.
            Thank you for your answer!

            - The advantage is that you can develop it however you want, without the limitation of certain templates etc. You have full control on your own.

            - The disadvantages is that you sometimes fail at develop and design your own site the way you expected. I am pretty much in this state now. But I will solve it, haha

            - The BIN and Escrow.com feature is a great suggestion. I will probably implement that when I have a design that I can live with
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            • #8
              I like your western cowboy vintage mix style .. and it match good with your logo

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              • #9
                Originally posted by Royal.Domains View Post
                I like your western cowboy vintage mix style .. and it match good with your logo

                Thank you very much! Happy to hear that.

                As said, it looks a little crazy now as all design updates goes live.
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                • #10
                  I prefer it minimalistic and those who want more info can seek it out with a few clicks if need be. One click check out are great, but you might want to consider using another option than Escrow.com. Recently had a buyer almost not make the deal because of the process they use (deal in the $xxxx region). Was saved by my registrar who offered to receive the payment on my behalf even though it was beyond the sums they usually allow.
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                  • #11
                    http://copy.center/

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                    • #12
                      Originally posted by Fancy Domains View Post

                      2. I have worked a lot with graphic design, but I get the impression that this look rather "old school" and maybe not that inviting. What is your impression?
                      The site is too gloomy. The pic there now (I know you will change) is too dark. The yellow background adds to the gloom. Depressing.

                      I came to your site looking for a domain and now I am questioning my existence.

                      Have images of bright sunny days not darker cloudy days. Stay with white backgrounds behind text, period.


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                      • #13
                        Originally posted by Dan View Post

                        First, a general question: Is there any advantage of using your own lander over using the Uniregistry Market or Bodis?
                        Uni charges 10% if you use their BIN landers.

                        Bodis is nice and free, most likely in exchange for your traffic data. I do like their clean looking pages. I plan to have my own made someday.

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                        • #14
                          Originally posted by Chad View Post

                          and now I am questioning my existence.
                          .. sounds perfect for a religious site






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                          • Chad
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                            Blessed.site ?

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                            If you are lucky enough maybe Marek will sell it to you for only $8k.

                        • #15
                          Originally posted by Chad View Post

                          The site is too gloomy. The pic there now (I know you will change) is too dark. The yellow background adds to the gloom. Depressing.

                          I came to your site looking for a domain and now I am questioning my existence.

                          Have images of bright sunny days not darker cloudy days. Stay with white backgrounds behind text, period.


                          Thank you very much for your response! I understand what you are saying, but I will keep the yellow background, but totally change the top.

                          I have no time for this now, but in a week or two.
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